- Character profile sheet
- Character arc worksheet
- Backstory notes
- Goal/motivation/conflict notes
- Any other relevant protagonist-specific planning materials
- A detailed character report covering my feedback and suggestions
- Annotations in the margins of your manuscript and planning materials
- Continued email support for 2 weeks following the delivery of my feedback to address any questions.
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- Your worldbuilding story bible/world codex
- Magic system notes
- Map and geographical notes
- Timeline of major events
- Conlang guide
- Any other relevant planning documents
- A detailed worldbuilding report covering my feedback and suggestions
- Annotations in the margins of the manuscript and planning materials
- Continued email support for 2 weeks following the delivery of my feedback to address any questions
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- Your beat sheet
- A long outline
- Chapter-by-chapter outlines
- Scene-by-scene outlines
- Any combination of the above
- 3-5 pages of summarized feedback
- Annotations in the margins
- Continued email support for 2 weeks following the delivery of my feedback to address any questions
Professional feedback from a fantasy editor on your outline and planning materials to help you avoid structural mistakes before drafting 100k words.
An in-depth analysis of your protagonist's goals, motivations, internal conflict, agency, and arc to ensure a compelling, well-developed lead.
A focused evaluation of your worldbuilding to strengthen its depth, clarity, consistency, and integration without the scope of a full developmental edit.
Investment: $250
Investment: $350
Investment: $150
Outline
Evaluation
Character
Deep-Dive
Worldbuilding
Review
Please note: Due to the scope of these services, a sample edit is not provided.
January 2027 and beyond
Because of my heavy editing schedule, I can only take 1-2 of these services per month. I'm now currently booking:
A Beat Sheet Cheat Sheet
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- A beat-by-beat breakdown
- Done-for-you word count calculations
- Side-by-side comparison of LOTR and HP
- Blank cells for brave writers
- Extra notes about each act and beat
Plot your fantasy novel with this FREE spreadsheet that follows The Hero's Journey—a timeless and epic story structure.