Story Alchemist Package
Line Editing
Mini Dev. Edit
Frequently Asked Questions
Manuscript Evals
Developmental Editing
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You've poured your heart and soul into your manuscript—now, it's time to elevate it to its highest potential. Through actionable, insightful, and supportive editing—and a bit of Manuscript Magic —we'll take your story from good to unforgettable.
Whether you need help untangling messy plot threads, deepening your characters' arcs, or ensuring your worldbuilding and magic system are a cohesive part of the story, you've come to the right place.
Let's make some magic!
Your Story Deserves an Editor Who Will Help You Make Magic.
- Marked-up manuscript with in-line and margin comments, suggestions, reactions, and praise.
- A detailed and actionable editorial report (usually around 20-30+ pages) discussing my feedback and suggestions.
- Revision planner & toolkit.
- 2 complimentary one-on-one coaching/strategy sessions (before the project begins and after the final edits are delivered) to discuss your vision, goals, and address any questions/next steps.
- Continued email support for 3 months after delivery of your edited manuscript.
- Exclusive access to my ENTIRE library of Author Resources.
- Discounted future services.
- Marked-up manuscript using Track Changes.
- Margin comments, suggestions, reactions, and praise (when needed).
- Line editing report discussing your manuscript's strengths and recurring issues.
- Line-level style sheet tracking voice guidelines, style preferences, and invented or unusual terms and spellings.
- Optional one-on-one coaching session to address any questions and discuss next steps.
- Continued email support for 3 months after delivery of your edit.
- Exclusive access to my ENTIRE library of author resources.
- Discounted future services.
Due to the scope of this service, a sample edit is not provided.
- Marked-up pages with in-line and margin comments, suggestions, reactions, and praise.
- A detailed and actionable editorial report (usually 3-5 pages) discussing my feedback and suggestions.
- Optional one-on-one coaching session to address any questions and discuss next steps.
- Continued email support for 30 days after delivery of your edited manuscript.
- Discounted future services.
Due to the scope of this service, a sample edit is not included.
- A detailed and actionable editorial report (usually 10-20 pages).
- Revision planner & toolkit.
- Optional one-on-one coaching session to address any questions and discuss next steps.
- Continued email support for 30 days after delivery of your evaluation.
- Discounted future services.
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STEP ONE
Here's where the real magic happens!
Equipped with new feedback, you get to return to your story and start making your changes, bringing you one step closer to realizing your author dreams and publishing your novel!
Are you ready to make Manuscript Magic?
Time to Revise
STEP SIX
On our agreed project due date, I'll send you the final invoice.
Once paid, your marked-up manuscript and the editorial letter will be uploaded to our shared Google Drive folder for you to view!
You'll have 4 weeks to review the edits, then we'll schedule our final call to address any questions you have and discuss your next steps!
Delivery & Final Call
STEP FIVE
It's finally time for me to buckle down and get to work editing your novel!
In your Author Portal, I will be updating you weekly, adding notes of encouragement, and sending payment reminders (if you're on a payment plan).
During this phase, you can sit back and relax or get started on a new project!
Editing
STEP FOUR
It's time to start making some magic!
Your onboarding packet includes your welcome to the Ladner Editorial fam, what to expect from the editorial process, access to your Author Portal and our shared Google Drive folder, and a questionnaire that helps me get to know your novel better.
Are you getting excited yet!?
Now that you've decided to move forward, I'll send the contract and deposit invoice your way.
Once you accept the terms of our agreement and make your first payment, we'll start the onboarding process.
Keep an eye on your inbox!
Before we start working together, you'll send me the first 10 pages of your manuscript, and I'll provide a sample edit.
If you have any questions or need a little more information about the service before getting started, we'll discuss the particulars via email.
If we decide we're a good fit, we move forward!
Onboarding
The Agreements
Consult & Sample Edit
STEP THREE
STEP TWO
Revision planner & toolkit
Plot structure mapping
Worldbuilding review (if applicable)
Edited manuscript using Track Changes
Marked-up manuscript with in-line and margin comments, suggestions, questions, reactions, praise, and chapter-by-chapter assessments.
Character evaluations
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Optional add-ons
Exclusive access to my ENTIRE resource library
Continued email support for 3 months after delivery of your edited manuscript
Time for revisions between edits
3 complimentary 1:1 coaching calls
Line-level style sheet
Line editing report
Detailed editorial report, including:
Developmental AND line editing
$0.05/word
Payment Plans Available
Where structure meets style—editorial magic for your plot, pacing, and prose.
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THE FAQs
What genres do you edit?
Fantasy is my first love—and the focus of Ladner Editorial. However, I love working with romance as well (especially romantasy)!
What is your editing style?
My feedback will always be a balanced mix of actionable, solutions-based comments (to help strengthen your story), my authentic reactions as a reader (to let you know how the story is being perceived), and marks of praise (to let you know what's working well and why)!
What is your standard turnaround time?
- Developmental & line editing: 4-8+ weeks
- Manuscript eval: 3-4+ weeks
- Mini edit: 2+ weeks
I'll include a more precise timeline with your quote!
Does my manuscript need to be finished before I book an editing service with you?
For developmental editing, yes. I require the manuscript to be its most polished/finished version.
However, some authors want help with multiple drafts, not only the final one. It's really dependent on your preference, budget, and goals.
If you're looking for help while writing, check out my coaching programs here
Can you edit the later books in my series if you didn't edit the first one?
Absolutely!
I do, however, charge a separate reading fee for earlier books. That way, I can familiarize myself with your world to ensure continuity!
What is your availability?
I am now booking for May 2027 and beyond!
I have 1-2 spots available each month for Manuscript Evals and Mini Edits (depending on my workload).
Reach out today for a FREE sample edit (dev. and line edits only) and quote
Can we chat before I commit to working with you?
Absolutely! Editing is a big investment, so it's best you're 100% ready.
I'm more than happy to address any questions and concerns you have via email, Instagram DMs, or a quick 15-minute Zoom chat!
Why do I need to sign a contract?
Not only does signing a contract protect us both, but it will also outline the scope of the project and the responsibilities for each of us!
Do you offer a payment plan?
20% retainer due at booking
40% due before I begin
40% due before the delivery of your final edits
My standard payment plan for developmental editing is as follows:
I would also be happy to discuss a customized payment plan to help make editing your novel possible!
How do I pay my invoice?
Your invoice can be found on the Author Portal. I process each invoice with Stripe and accept all major debit and credit cards.
Why do you require a retainer?
The retainer holds your spot on my calendar! Once we agree on the terms of our contract and I receive your payment, your start date is set!
The retainer is non-refundable.
Do you offer any discounts?
Book a full developmental or line edit with me and get 10% off all subsequent services.
10% off for military-affiliated writers.
Save $150 when you pay in full for developmental or line editing.
Discounted editorial package.
I offer a few types of discounts:
I can't afford editing, but still need help!
I believe that writing, editing, and publishing resources should be accessible to everyone! That's why I offer various guides, courses, and services for all budgets.
Head to The Library to check out the resources!
Whether you're looking for developmental editing to bring your story to life or a mentor to guide you on your epic writing journey, you've come to the right place!
Are you ready to make some magic?
So, Dear Writer...
I'm Ready! Where do I sign up?
Manuscript Magic?
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